This is my second Hump Day Hook blog post – I decided to brave it again as you were all so nice to me last week 
For those of you who don’t know; Hump Day Hook is a blog-hop where authors share a paragraph of their work for your viewing pleasure each Wednesday. Go to the Hump Day Hook blog to find the rest of the crew just giving their hard written words away for free!
I am following on with my urban fantasy Foul is Fair from my last post where our girl was watching her client at the club:
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He flirted with a skinny little punk boy whose wide kohl-lined eyes could be seen from all the way up here. While I watched my client, my eyes flicked over the crowd around him. Surveillance could be a bitch, but even though I was concentrating on the scene below me, I could still feel the witch hunter; watching me.
Cue the dramatic music! If you’re hooked, this little short is available as a free download from Amazon Barnes & Noble Smashwords Kobo and iTunes – but I can’t link to that as my PC hates Apple, or vice versa, sorry!
I hope you enjoyed this snippet and don’t forget to visit the main site. Happy humping!
Ooo, watching!!! Love that hook!
Nicely done! Loved it.
Great tension!
An intriguing hook – well done.
A lot going on in this hook, really makes the reader curious to read on. Good jon.
Ohmigosh, she has to watch her person and also be wary of someone watching her. What an intriguing situation.
Love this snippet but then again I love the whole story. ;-D
I had missed your hook last week so had to go read it first.
So she’s a witch guarding a gay vampire politician?? Love it!
Oooh, interesting
Nice job!
Oh wow, something to suit the M/M readers too. Cracking hook.
Wow. I’m hooked…surveillance detail being watched by a witch hunter. Love it!